Najwa Karam - Khelis El-Sahar

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  1. ellyali said:

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    خلص السهر

    خلص السهر ومانعسو عينينا
    the night is over and theres no sleep in our eyes

    ضجر القمر ومدينا ايدينا
    the moon is upset and yet we still try

    والشمس ضويوتصبح علي

    the sunlight says good morning to us
    ***
    سهرانه مع حبيبى يا عتمه لاتفللى
    i stay at nights with my love so o dawn dont come

    القمر غاب وراح يا نجمه ضللى
    the moon has gone away so o star stay with us


    حبيبى بعدو هون قلبى بيبقى هون
    when my lover is away my heart suffers alot

    لو نحنا فليينا
    وتصبح علينا
    good morning to us
    ***
    سهرتو معنا سهرنا معكم
    you stay at night with us and we do the same

    ما النا قلب نودعكم
    we are not able, because of our love for you to say farewell

    انتو الفرحه والسهريه
    you are happiness and joy

    انتو صوتى والغنيه
    you are my voice and my music

    ولو مهما سهرنا وغنينا
    if we stay awake at night and sing for ever

    الليل بيبقى زغيرر علي
    the night is short for us


    there are flaws, greatly flawed but we catch the idea.
    Salam
    Elly
     
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    Oh beautiful Elly! Amazing work habibti, just a few corrections which I will post later inshallah <3
     
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    Great work my dear, here are just a few tiny corrections

    Quote Originally Posted by ellyali View Post

    ضجر القمر ومدينا ايدينا
    the moon is upset and yet we still try
    w madayna iydayna -> we extended our hands

    Quote Originally Posted by ellyali View Post

    سهرانه مع حبيبى يا عتمه لاتفللى
    i stay at nights with my love so o dawn dont come
    I'm staying up with my love so night dont go

    Quote Originally Posted by ellyali View Post

    حبيبى بعدو هون قلبى بيبقى هون
    when my lover is away my heart suffers alot
    My lover is still here so my heart stays here

    Quote Originally Posted by ellyali View Post

    لو نحنا فليينا
    If we go...


    Quote Originally Posted by ellyali View Post

    ما النا قلب نودعكم
    we are not able, because of our love for you to say farewell
    We dont have the heart to tell you goodbye
     
  4. aria22 said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by ellyali View Post
    خلص السهر

    خلص السهر ومانعسو عينينا
    the night is over and theres no sleep in our eyes

    ضجر القمر ومدينا ايدينا
    the moon is upset and yet we still try

    والشمس ضويوتصبح علي

    the sunlight says good morning to us
    ***
    سهرانه مع حبيبى يا عتمه لاتفللى
    i stay at nights with my love so o dawn dont come

    القمر غاب وراح يا نجمه ضللى
    the moon has gone away so o star stay with us


    حبيبى بعدو هون قلبى بيبقى هون
    when my lover is away my heart suffers alot

    لو نحنا فليينا
    وتصبح علينا
    good morning to us
    ***
    سهرتو معنا سهرنا معكم
    you stay at night with us and we do the same

    ما النا قلب نودعكم
    we are not able, because of our love for you to say farewell

    انتو الفرحه والسهريه
    you are happiness and joy

    انتو صوتى والغنيه
    you are my voice and my music

    ولو مهما سهرنا وغنينا
    if we stay awake at night and sing for ever

    الليل بيبقى زغيرر علي
    the night is short for us


    there are flaws, greatly flawed but we catch the idea.
    Salam
    Elly




    thank you ssssssssssoooooooooooo much ellyali it means so much for me...... thanks again!!!
     
  5. ellyali said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by VivaPalestina View Post
    Great work my dear, here are just a few tiny corrections



    w madayna iydayna -> we extended our hands



    I'm staying up with my love so night dont go



    My lover is still here so my heart stays here



    If we go...




    We dont have the heart to tell you goodbye


    that's not tiny.. i perceive that as ALOT
    but nevertheless it is viva who does it not me.
    Well thank you for having my back. my "GF"
     
  6. ellyali said:

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    خلص السهر

    خلص السهر ومانعسو عينينا
    the night is over and theres no sleep in our eyes

    ضجر القمر ومدينا ايدينا
    we extended our hands


    والشمس ضويوتصبح علي

    the sunlight says good morning to us
    ***
    سهرانه مع حبيبى يا عتمه لاتفللى
    I'm staying up with my love so night dont go


    القمر غاب وراح يا نجمه ضللى
    the moon has gone away so o star stay with us


    حبيبى بعدو هون قلبى بيبقى هون
    My lover is still here so my heart stays here


    لو نحنا فليينا
    if we go

    وتصبح علينا
    good morning to us
    ***
    سهرتو معنا سهرنا معكم
    you stay at night with us and we do the same

    ما النا قلب نودعكم
    We dont have the heart to tell you goodbye

    انتو الفرحه والسهريه
    you are happiness and joy

    انتو صوتى والغنيه
    you are my voice and my music

    ولو مهما سهرنا وغنينا
    if we stay awake at night and sing for ever

    الليل بيبقى زغيرر علي
    the night is short for us


    Here is the edited version, credits to Viva <3