Sarah? Sweetheart, by the way... Turkish is almost like arabic with the possessives... You ALWAYS have to add a "-(i)m" to "mine" Like, it's impossible to say "Benim Elif" o:, then you would actually talk a "cottage-turkish"
You could preferably say "Elifim" o: Or, if wished "BENIM Elifim"
But always, always put a "-(i)m" at the end, sis. 
Oh before I forget..
Very good writing, Sarah <3 ;D
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