Majida Al Roumy - El yaoum 3ada 7abibi [*]

Hi,

I need help to correct my translation of El yaoum 3ada habibi one of the most beautiful song recorded by Majida.

Thanks in advance

http://www.4shared.com/file/69982070...da_habibi.html


اليوم عاد حبيبي
Elyoum 3ada habeebi
My beloved returned today
لبلد الجمال
Libalad el jamal
To the land of the beauty
و مـرَّ كـالغـزال
Wa marra kalghazal
and passed like a gazelle
في طرفه الكحيل
Fi tarfihi el ka7eel
with his black eyelid


اليوم عاد حبيبي
Elyoum 3ada habeebi
My beloved returned today
لموطن الجهاد
Lemauten el jihad
To the homeland of the effort
لقبلة البلاد
Liqiblat el belad
To the right direction of the country
و حيها الظليل
Wa 7aeeha az zaleel
And its shadowy neighborhood

سقيته ورودي
Saqaytouhou wouroudi
I've sprinkled him with my roses
و بعد ما ارتوى
Wa ba3dou ma artawa
but he is still not satisfied
و فيته عهودي
Wafaytouhou 3ouhoudi
I've fulfilled my promises to him
فأزهر الهوى
Faazhar al hawa
So the love has flourished


اليوم عاد حبيبي
Elyoum 3ada habeebi
My beloved returned today
لموطن الوفاء
Lemaouten el wafa
To the homeland of the loyalty
لمنهل الصفاء
Lemenhal es safa
The place of the honesty
و ريّه العليل
Wa reeyhy el3aleel
And its pleasant beauty

you don't need a correction boy!!!
you need to help us out here

Originally Posted by larosa

you don't need a correction girl!!!
you need to help us out here

Hi ya warde

No corrections ? unbelievable !!!!

My Arabic has been improved a lot but I still need to study hard before beginning to do good translations. Actually I only translate small songs in fus7a like that one above.

Thanks

George (lol)

good job George ... you are very good in translation ...