Fairouz - Ya mayla 3alghousoun

Hi,


I need help to correct my translation of the song. Thanks to Daydream to translate the first verse to me.

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يا مايلة عالغصون عيني سمرا يا حورية
Ya mayla 3alghousoun 3ayni samra ya 7ourya
Oh beautiful nymph swaying on the branches, oh how fascinated I am

ورد الهوى عندنا بيموج عالميه
Ward el hawa 3andina bimouj 3almaya
Love's flowers are passing us floating on the water

يا مايلة عالغصون عيني سمرا يا حورية
Ya mayla 3alghousoun 3ayni samara ya 7ourya
Oh beautiful nymph swaying on the branches, oh how fascinated I am

نسم علينا الهنا بألحان سحرية
Nasam 3aleyna el hana bi2l7an sa7arya
The happiness sung to us fascinated melodies

نحنا دعانا الهوى تانلتقي بعيدو
na7na da3ana el hawa ta nilti2i ba3eedou
We invited the love and we will have a date far from him (???????????/ not sure)

رحنا بليلة غوى نقطف عانقيدو
Ra7na bilaylet ghiwa nou2touf 3ana2eedou
We went in the pleasant night to harvest the fruits of the love/the grappes (??????????/ not sure)

و بعدو الحلو ما أرتوى و طابت مواعيدو
W ba3dou el 7elou ma 2rtawa w tabet mawa3eedou
The fruits of the love/the grappes are still sweet and succulent and the date/(to date the love) was pleasant (??????????? Not sure)

و تهنا نغني سوا بليلات قمرية
W tehna nghani sawa blaylat 2mrya
And in happy we will sing together in the monlight nights

Thanks in advance

Anyone ? please

Is it so difficult to correct those few lines ?

Believe it or not George, it actually is! Standard arabic is challenging Plus, your one seems good

Originally Posted by gbasfora

نسم علينا الهنا بألحان سحرية
Nasam 3aleyna el hana bi2l7an sa7arya
The happiness sung to us fascinated melodies

Nasam - breezed
Si7riya - Magical

Originally Posted by gbasfora

نحنا دعانا الهوى تانلتقي بعيدو
na7na da3ana el hawa ta nilti2i ba3eedou
We invited the love and we will have a date far from him (???????????/ not sure)

B3iydo - in its eid (means joy)
nilti2i - meet up

We invited the love to meet up in its day of joy

Originally Posted by gbasfora

رحنا بليلة غوى نقطف عانقيدو
Ra7na bilaylet ghiwa nou2touf 3ana2eedou
We went in the pleasant night to harvest the fruits of the love/the grappes (??????????/ not sure)

Yeah its right

Originally Posted by gbasfora

و بعدو الحلو ما أرتوى و طابت مواعيدو
W ba3dou el 7elou ma 2rtawa w tabet mawa3eedou
The fruits of the love/the grappes are still sweet and succulent and the date/(to date the love) was pleasant (??????????? Not sure)

ba3do -still
2rtawa - quenched his thirst
mawa3id - times
And still the pretty one is thirsty, what good tiimes

Originally Posted by gbasfora

و تهنا نغني سوا بليلات قمرية
W tehna nghani sawa blaylat 2mrya
And in happy we will sing together in the monlight nights

tehna - lost
We wandered around singing together in the moonlit nights

يا مايلة عالغصون عيني سمرا يا حورية
Ya mayla 3alghousoun 3ayni samara ya 7ourya
Oh beautiful nymph swaying on the branches, oh how fascinated You are (I'm impressed)

ورد الهوى عندنا بيموج عالميه
Love's flowers are undulating on the water

نحنا دعانا الهوى تانلتقي بعيدو
na7na da3ana el hawa ta nilti2i ba3eedou
We invited the love and we will have a date far from him (???????????/ not sure)
We were invited by passion to meet in its festival
(If we invited the passion then the verb will be دعينا/ دعونا)

العناقيد are panicles

in fact غوى is not pleasant, it is seduction

وطابت مواعيدو
But his dates are good

وتهنا نغني سوا بليلات قمرية
I think here it means sth like that they went singing all the night

Thank you VivaPalestina and Oriee for the corrections. You always have been very helpful persons to my requestes.

video fixed