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  1. Another World, Another Start (My First)
  2. complecated
  3. my first song
  4. twice that: feed back plz
  5. need feedback
  6. MOST DAY"S tell me what u think
  7. one shot: please read and comment
  8. Mirrors and Smoke
  9. Is this any cop?
  10. Just wouldn't Work
  11. Fate's Joke
  12. Merry Christmas
  13. My new song ''Silent Night''
  14. Just a character
  15. Bring It Back
  16. My Life Your Entertainment
  17. Pretending
  18. Gnusmas
  19. read me lyrics
  20. Living Nightmare [C+CC!]
  21. My New Song
  22. 24's, another one haha
  23. shame
  24. im crazy, this was written 5 years ago, let me know, check out my ****. lataz all.
  25. Fading To Black(incomplete)
  26. See What You've Become
  27. mnemonic
  28. Hai Guzarish lyrics
  29. Just Like Fire.
  30. Spartacus
  31. Arsonists Are Flammable
  32. My First Song. Please help me?
  33. Porno Baby
  34. Untitled (any suggestions?)
  35. So Cold
  36. Dead Man Walking
  37. Will it happen?PLEASE COMMENT!
  38. none
  39. haven't posted in a while...half done, should I keep goin?
  40. Maybe I'm a Liar
  41. unconscious
  42. digested
  43. Centimental Value
  44. A very sad personal song (unnamed)
  45. Say You'll Stay
  46. Lost Love
  47. I Hate The Beast Inside Me
  48. God of the ants
  49. Aside Of Here
  50. Kill Or Die
  51. lost
  52. Smiling on the inside
  53. shut up, I'm depressed
  54. Sharing The Good Old Times
  55. I want you back
  56. Your in my skin
  57. she gives me a pumpin stray
  58. house of cards
  59. Gone
  60. Turn You Away
  61. Untitled (Needs a title)
  62. looking for a rescue (thinking for a better title)
  63. The pearl earrings ( one more before bed )
  64. A million things I can't do now, Lyrics by me
  65. ~comeing back home~
  66. I Hear The Toll
  67. High Horse (Dear "God")
  68. Jade
  69. Summertime
  70. fIrst lyric
  71. cathedral, a short poem, and a comment
  72. Please comment
  73. just another day
  74. A demon within me
  75. sinister and twisted
  76. My world
  77. For You
  78. Backseat Love Affair
  79. Tell Me What U Think
  80. Closer
  81. Leave behind(Lost In The Darkness pt2)
  82. My Fallen Angel
  83. Fight The Dark Knights
  84. Madness
  85. My Drug
  86. Everything
  87. first thread
  88. I Am My Own
  89. infinity of music
  90. A dream
  91. Unfollowed
  92. New Member Beginner
  93. Feel the love
  94. Song For Bridgend
  95. Crystal Teardrop, plz comment
  96. Finally Awake
  97. black rose
  98. short freestyles to real songs
  99. Relationsh*t (Crumpled Paper Hearts) - Rewrittin
  100. Anyone Like This???
  101. Im Falling
  102. snaresnarecrash
  103. Swagger like mine
  104. Lonely
  105. Cansado de ser El Bordo
  106. 3rd attempt at lyrics
  107. Castaway
  108. Xavier
  109. Missing persons (please comment)
  110. escape from the rain
  111. Rest In Peace
  112. The Emptiness
  113. Do You Believe?
  114. Ill Never Go Away
  115. In the corner of my mind.
  116. Untitled Song, Plz Comment
  117. Corinthian (I beg you to comment)
  118. Amoniac/Cars
  119. Words Of Truth
  120. some random rap lyrics
  121. Song chorus good or bad?
  122. Endless Curse
  123. wasted life
  124. wicked ways
  125. lets fall back
  126. A cold mornig
  127. Heart Throb
  128. Stuck With This
  129. Fireworks - please comment
  130. lost in the darkness
  131. Describe the perfect place
  132. The Question, plz comment
  133. chorus' for on the edge of love
  134. To Be An Emcee
  135. Gone
  136. I want to be a Machine
  137. The colours of live
  138. Untitled
  139. JD is all I need.
  140. The Summer Contradicts My Existence
  141. Go Go Dancer- Trey-C feat Josh Franks (Alexia Lei Remix)
  142. World(911)- read and review
  143. Forever Remembered
  144. I'm not over you yet(READ ++ REVIEW)
  145. summer night
  146. Sin
  147. Broken Thoughts
  148. Don't Want You- read and Review
  149. Like Tomorrow (Please comment)
  150. The world will stop- Read and review
  151. i wrote this about a stupid guy
  152. Dumb Girl 1 and 2
  153. Heartbroken- Please read and review
  154. terminal disease
  155. Day by the Sea
  156. First Alternative-Type Song
  157. Holding the world in the palm of my hand...
  158. What's your favorite?
  159. Criticize my lyrics.
  160. Half of us - read and review
  161. I miss you- read and review
  162. Why- Please read and review
  163. Last Seconds Missing
  164. My rap lyrics
  165. My Last Goodbye
  166. Hip Hop
  167. When We Fell From the Sky, I Bet We Were Beautiful Too
  168. mixing?
  169. Tell Me
  170. Figure It Out (rough Draft 1)
  171. New to Lyric Writing...."All Again"
  172. Double Agent Orange
  173. Turn Back Around (Demo)
  174. Please read and review: I know
  175. don't know the name of this song
  176. Live Your Life
  177. Change
  178. My Turn
  179. simple questions
  180. Bloodsucker
  181. Daises - Even If You Don't Comment On Any Other One Today, PLEASE Comment This!
  182. Untitled - Need Help
  183. This war
  184. Dreams of a soldier ( Indie rock / Punk rock)
  185. Shade of Red ( Goth rock / Nu metal )
  186. The System ( Punk Rock / Heavy Rock )
  187. Free from the machine ( Punk Rock / Heavy Rock )
  188. **** the rules ( Punk Rock / Heavy Rock )
  189. Little Miss Atittude - My song please review
  190. El Salvador, Dear Salvatore
  191. Chamber of Horrors (Horror Punk)
  192. We Reach The End
  193. What I Feel
  194. I will make it - my song but i need help with the chorus =]
  195. A Millie A Millie - Freestyle
  196. Betrayal Causes Success
  197. Heart Broken
  198. Complaining into a career
  199. Imagine
  200. stop the violence
  201. Hip Hop is Dead?
  202. The Dream Part 1
  203. The Dream Part 2
  204. 17 At War
  205. My Life
  206. Weak In the Knees
  207. In The End
  208. Closets Shouldn't Have Eyes [comments more than welcome]
  209. Calling All Song Writers
  210. First song attempt
  211. I don't know if this should be here but
  212. Irony For The Win
  213. A letter from my conscience (and he's cynical!)
  214. Mr.Pokerface
  215. The Wrong Way
  216. lyrics in progress
  217. Song Contest Extravaganza
  218. Can someone help me?
  219. Bad Addiction (song i wrote)
  220. Now-A-Days (song i wrote)
  221. Names Dont Effect Me (song i wrote)
  222. when two worlds collide
  223. What is Real
  224. Song About Hannah Montana
  225. a chorus, any ideas for verses?
  226. A beginning of a song
  227. "Who You Are">PLEASE COMMENT
  228. I can only Dream: PLEASE REVIEW
  229. The First song i ever wrote.
  230. Better Song Lyrics Competition :P
  231. Halloween on christmas :D
  232. Ditches
  233. Heavan has Angelic Choirs, Hell has Cataphonic Choruses
  234. I will never forget you. opinions
  235. Necromantic Fools
  236. what you think? be honest and give advice if any is had
  237. Can Someone help me with a title?
  238. Song Lyrics Competition
  239. Fond Farewell
  240. The Joker (Not related to batman......)
  241. Modern Dracula
  242. Episode
  243. Tomorrow's Sorrow - Opinions
  244. Collision Course
  245. Lonely
  246. Dedicated to: My Lovely Love That I Love 'til Love Loves Life
  247. Can someone help?
  248. Can someone help me?
  249. the beginning of a new song...(PLEASE COMMENT; IT'S MY FIRST)
  250. start of a new one