tell me how my worship song is

[Gawain2112]

ok, this is like my first ever written worship song and i want some feedback before i show my pastor.

Calling of the lord


when i feel left out a voice calls to me,
"have you heard the calling of the lord?"
I sought the lord and he awnsered me,
"have you heard the calling of the lord?"
He delivered me from all of my fears,
"have you heard the calling of the lord?"
Let the lost and the poor hear and rejoice,
"have you heard the calling of the lord?"

And all gods people sing,
glory to the soverign king,
we have heard the calling of our lord,
we have heard the calling of our lord,
(x2)

The lions my grow weak and hungry,
"who will awnser the calling of the lord?"
but those who seek the lord lack no good thing,
"who will awnser the calling of the lord?"
Contend, o lord, who contend with me,
"who will awnser the calling of the lord?"
fight against those who fight against me,
"who will awnser the calling of the lord?"


And all gods people sing,
glory to the sovreign king,
we have awnsered the calling of our lord,
we have awnsered the calling of our lord.
(x2)


THANKS!!!

[Musiclover151617]

Wow, thats your first! Its really good, i only have one suggestion... Most songwriters only use the name of the song in the chorus, because the first and secound verses are usally the parts that give information that lead up to the name and all that jazz... But i like it, you've got talent! my verse song was not good at all.... lol