Helmut Fritz - Ca m'énerve

Qu'est-ce que quelqu'un peut regarder mon traduction de cette chanson?

J'entre au Costes boire un verre
I enter Costes to drink a glass
Mais la serveuse me pompe l'air
But the server pumps me air (Don't know what it means, but it doesn't sound very polite... )
J'ai pas la réservation
I don't have a reservation
Je ressors j'ai l'air d'un con
I leave again, I have the look of an idiot
Ca m'énerve, oui ça m'énerve
It annoys me, yes it annoys me
J'ai un cadeau à faire
I have a present to give
De chez Zadig & Voltaire
From Zadig and Voltaire
Le pull où c'est marqué "Rock"
The sweatshirt where it says "Rock"
Mais y'a la rupture de stock
But ????? rupture of stock

Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Toutes celles qui portent la frange à la Kate Moss
All of those who take fringe to Kate Moss??
Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Le rouge à lèvres c'est fini maintenant c'est le gloss
The red on your lips, it's over now it's gloss
Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Toutes celles qui rentrent dans le jean slim en taille 34
All those who go back to the slim jeans in size 34
Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
La seule vue sur le string te donne envie de les abattre
The only view over the thong makes you want to pull them down
Scheiße!
S***!

Devant le club VIP y'a plein de Lamborghini
In front of the VIP club it's filled with Lamborghinis
Moi j'arrive sur mon vespa on me dit tu rentres pas
I arrive with my Vespa and they told me you're not going in
Mais ça m'énerve
But it annoys me
J'entre chez Weston une blondasse au téléphone
I go into Westion's a dull blond on the telephone
Me dit : « j'peux vous aider ? »
It says "Can I help you?"
Non je vous ai pas sonné
No, I didn't call you
Elle m'énerve, mon Dieu qu'elle m'énerve
She annoys me, my God that she annoys me
J'ai bu le mojito au Milliardaire
I drank a mojito at the Milliardaire
Dans le carré j'ai tout vomi par terre
In the square I threw up everything on the ground
J'ai perdu mon ticket pour le vestiaire
I lost my ticket in the changing room
Je trouve pas de taxi, ach, c'est la guerre !
I don't take a taxi, uh, this is war

Ca m'éneeeeerve
it annoys me
Toutes celles qui boivent le champagne rosé
All those who drink Rose Champagne
Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Pour oublier qu'en Jimmy Chooo t'as mal aux pieds
To forget that in Jimmy Chooo you have it bad on your feet ??
Ca m'énerve tous ces gens qui font la queue chez Ladurée
It annoys me, these people who queue Chez Laduree
Tout ça pour des macarons
????
Mais bon...
But good...
Il parait qu'ils sont bons
It seems that they're good

Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Toutes celles qui dansent sur le dancefloor comme des princesses
All those people that are dancing on the Dancefloor like some princesses
Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Toutes celles comme toi qui écoutent beaucoup trop fort la musique
All those people like you that listen to music way to loud
Ca m'éneeeeerve
It annoys me
Moi je monte les voir et je leurs dis avec le cric : "ça m'énerve"
Me, I get up to see them and tell them with jack (?): "that's annoying

That's how I'd have translated it .
I understand it all since French is my native language ,
So I cleared up some things you didn't get . =)

Helmut Fritz - That gets on my nerves

I get in Costes to drink a glass
But the server bores me out
I have no booking
I leave looking like an idiot
That gets on my nerves , yes that gets on my nerves

I have to buy a present
From Zadig & Voltaire
This sweater that says " Rock "
But it's out of stock

That gets on my nerves
All these girls with bangs like Kate Moss
That gets on my nerves
Red lipsticks are out of fashion , now it's all about gloss
That gets on my nerves
All these girls who can fit into 34-sized slim jeans
That gets on my nerves
Just looking at their g-strings makes you want to shoot them down
Sh*t !

In front of the VIP club , there's plenty of Lamborghinis
I arrive on my Vespa , I am told I can't get in
But that gets on my nerves
Getting in Weston , a brassy blonde on the phone
Says me " Can I help you ? "
No , I didn't ask you
She gets on my nerves, ow my God how she gets on my nerves
I drank a mojito at the Milliardaire's
On the dance floor I brought it all up over the ground
I lost my ticket in the cloakroom
I can't find a taxi , ow , this is war !

That gets on my nerves
All these girls drinking pink champagne
That gets on my nerves
To forget that their feet hurt in Jimmy Choo's shoes
That gets on my nerves , all these people standing in line at Ladurée's
Just for macaroons
But well ..
I was told they taste good

That gets on my nerves
All these girls dancing on the dance floor like princesses
That gets on my nerves
All these girls like you listening to music way too loud
That gets on my nerves
I'm going upstairs to tell them with a jack : " That gets on my nerves "

Thank you! ^_^ Yours definitely sounds a lot more natural.

I love this song and the translation is right