I found only two little and insignificant wrongs, here they are corrected for you my friend !!!
"you're a chain that can break" it becomes "you're a chain than can be broken"
"the lack of understanding that can become clear" it's better to say "the lack of understanding that can be clarified (by us)"
For the rest, in my opinion, I haven't found any other mistakes... Congratulations for your Italian knowledge !!!!
