Is my transformation of the lyric correct or not?
My transformation of Britney's "Every time" into following complete sentences. Are these right?
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Why are we strangers when our love is strong?
Why carry on without me?
Everytime I try to fly I fall.
Without my wings I feel so small.
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1.Once someone told me that w-question could not be followed by a sub-clause such as the when-clause here. How do you think about it?
2. In some other place, I saw they put "without my wings" with "I fall". (Everything I try to fly, I fall without my wings. I fell so small)
Which is right, mine or theirs?
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