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Old 10-15-2006, 02:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Is my transformation of the lyric correct or not?

My transformation of Britney's "Every time" into following complete sentences. Are these right?
.................................................. ..........................
Why are we strangers when our love is strong?
Why carry on without me?

Everytime I try to fly I fall.
Without my wings I feel so small.
.................................................. ....................

1.Once someone told me that w-question could not be followed by a sub-clause such as the when-clause here. How do you think about it?

2. In some other place, I saw they put "without my wings" with "I fall". (Everything I try to fly, I fall without my wings. I fell so small)
Which is right, mine or theirs?
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