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Old 11-21-2007, 07:25 AM   #1 (permalink)
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what do you think of this poem, quote thing i found yesterday?

"The sun will shine, during this day no more.The heavens have creeped away.
The sky is clouded the ground is damp. I don't want to stay.
the roads are fogged the sorroundings muffled, the sound can't break through. My spirits leap through the darkened shadows, scared and frightened away. the moons taunting makes no sound as it laughs in deaths face.
Chills and bumps crawl down my spine, while cold and helplessness covers all space. life is ended, yet it's only just begun."
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Old 11-24-2007, 11:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What a wonderfully dark little verse.
It could possibly be in reference to an event in the author's life that filled him with great despair. The author is attempting to convey a message of extreme sorrow as it seems the world has abandoned him: "the moons taunting makes no sound as it laughs in deaths face." (possibly making reference to physical distance in a metaphorical sense as the moon does not have any reason not to be present because of something that happened so far away) The author's joy has been taken away "My spirits leap through the darkened shadows, scared and frightened away." And he realizes his lack of ability to resolve this issue and concludes that his sorrow was beget by life ending, but the metaphorical "life" of the Sorrow has just begun.
This is all just opinionated and bears no semblance upon the author's motives, and it is purely what I drew from the reading. I hope it resembles the response you desired?
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Old 11-30-2007, 02:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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if you want to be remembered as a creepy dead-wishing emo put this in a yearbook. if you think this is what reflects your personality best i kind of feel sorry for you o_O sorry to say that so directly but i guess you wanted an honest answer.
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Old 01-09-2008, 12:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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ya i did thanks
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