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Old 04-21-2008, 04:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Let me Know how yo like this song please

Title I know a lot

There are a lot of things that I know.
I keep on learning so that my knowledge will grow.
I know how to put together computers,
turn a winner out of a loser.
I know how to bake,
there are a lot of things that I know how to make.
I like to bake cookies pies and cakes.

Iam tough,
know some real good stuff,
to get out of situaions that will make other's lives real tough.
I have some information,
make sure you have a good occupation.
Stay out of bad situations,
that can cause aggrevations
that can lead to starvation,
eat the right foods so your mind have less limitations.
Please listen to the G-Man,
just keep a plan,
that will help your knowledge expand.
When your plans have been accomplish,
most of your problems will be completely demolished,
you can get rid of a lot problems when your skills are polished.
So take head to what I have said,
and keep them in your head.
I know a Lot
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Old 04-22-2008, 11:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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well, its interesting for sure.
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wow, amazing
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Some of these lines seem a little much, no? Try to say more with less words, as apposed to as little as you have with many. You're a capable lyricist, you've proved that, you have the skill to be great, you just need to focus a little more, analyze the greats, and then analyze yourself. But it's certainly a start.
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