This is my first go at writing lyrics and I would just like to hear any feedback, negative or positive. Or any sugjestions or ideas, thank you!
It's about my senior summer coming to an end
For as long as we’ve hated this town
I wish we all could stick around
I don’t feel like getting older
I’m happy where we are
So don’t go so far,
From me
Don’t let me think about what could be
Lets stay here
And live
Forever young in the summer time
Cause when we grow up
We show up
To become what we never wanted to be
You’ll being wearing a suit and tie
And by and by
The summer is over
With the care free times
I remember
Hanging out watching movies
Just to watch the time go by
We never realized how soon we’d have to say goodbye
I hope to see you again
And we’ll stay in touch
But the summer came to an end
And so did the rush
We’ve all had our chances to be here
And now we’re all gone, gone away
We’ve moved on
So think of me later
When you hear this song
In this boring town we all wanted to get out
But I realize now I want to stay
So lets stay
Lets stay
Lets find a way
And stay
Forever young in the summer time
Cause when we grow up
We show up
To become what we never wanted to be
You’re no longer you
And I’m no longer me
We’re all each other
Can’t you see
We were always so care free and happy
Now it’s over
Cause by and by and by and goodbye
We’ve all grown up
That summer couldn’t last forever
No matter how hard we tried
it’s gone
We gotta move on
But I think I’ll stay a little longer
Take one more look around
At this wonderful town
And be
Forever young in the summer
What do you think
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