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Old 07-05-2006, 12:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Painkillers

second song ive ever written. pretty slow, reads how its written with the pauses in between line breaks

I ask,
nothing more from you when you're gone
you have shown me all i need to know

one thing i wish
is that you would stop for me
you say its not deep enough
but i know you bleed

[chorus]
Painkillers take away
all the pain felt today
leave you where you lie you said
leave me when i fall, im dead

stop it before you really do some damage
help me out here as i dont
want to lose a friend
all you know is it cures your pain

[chorus]


you know i hate to see you cry
so please now
hear me out
im begging this of you
i know the way you feel
taking pain over all the consequences
i know it seems over bearing
but it will be ok

[chorus]
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Old 07-06-2006, 11:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow! This is a really powerful song. Is this a real story? If it is, I'm sorry. This kinda thing shouldn't happen to someone. You are a really good songwriter. I think you're better than me! If you want you can check my stuff out. I'm Sewn Up (I've taken up about half the page). I've got a fairly wide variety of songs on here, so if you find something of mine that you don't like, don't worry. I'm sure I've written something to pique your interest.
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