my lyrics- battles

[dahotshotda]

We pick up our shield and pick up our sword
There's no where to run we all hale our lord
Blood,bones,wounds we all have to see
But theres no running away its our destiny

Pride and glory we all shall be praised
We all know that this is how legends are made
For the king we shall die with no regrets
Leaving a legacy for our
children to follow our footsteps
If god has mercy and lets us live another day
It is certainly because we all have prayed
The only thing we trust in war is our strengh and power
But we know that we all can be dead within the hour


We pick up our shield and pick up our sword
There's no where to run we all hale our lord
Blood,bones,wounds we all will see
But theres no running away its our destiny

Before charging we all shout our kings name
He stands behind us and thinks its all a game
We are the soldiers that are dying
But he has no shame
Counting the victories and getting all the fame
United and together we fought all the wars
Yelling and screaming banging on the doors
Calling the men to come out and fight
Help them unite with god and see the white light

We picked up our shields and picked up our swords
There's no where to run we all hailed our lord
We won and got our glorious victory
Battle of troy it was called, we made history

[steveonomics]

Before charging we all shout our kings name
He stands behind us and thinks its all a game
We are the soldiers that are dying
But he has no shame
Counting the victories and getting all the fame
United and together we fought all the wars
Yelling and screaming banging on the doors
Calling the men to come out and fight
Help them unite with god and see the white light


This has to be my favourite verse in this song. Very visual and makes one think. I like it.

[dahotshotda]

Before charging we all shout our kings name
He stands behind us and thinks its all a game
We are the soldiers that are dying
But he has no shame
Counting the victories and getting all the fame
United and together we fought all the wars
Yelling and screaming banging on the doors
Calling the men to come out and fight
Help them unite with god and see the white light


This has to be my favourite verse in this song. Very visual and makes one think. I like it.

thanks
i also really liked the end part
but did you notice the part in the end after that ? that it says it was the battle of troy ? a lot of people dont bother looking at it becuase its the end of the song
im thinking of changing the last part so ppl will read it
what do you think ?

[steveonomics]

Maybe, you could title it The Battle of Troy and just um maybe change the last part. Just a thought, but really really good writing.

[rashid.martin123@gmail.co]

This is really good i like it