Drama Queen

[RobberBaron]

I kinda like this actually…
I've written the music too and made a sample recording, but I want to improve it before uploading
D major, peeps

Drama Queen - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2012

[Verse]

You're always right, when you act tough,
I try too hard, or not enough?
I just want to feel accepted

You only laugh when you're mean,
You're always mad, and then blame me,
S'not like I wanna push you away

[Pre-Chorus]

It's not easy trying to live life being me

[Chorus]

Well maybe I'm just a drama queen,
And my life is just worth what it seems,
I'm a loser who just attention seeks,
So really you should just blame me,
The drama queen

[Verse]

I tried being funny, I tried being nice,
All your presents cost full price,
No matter what I'm still pathetic to you

I tried being happy, and even naive,
You just shout and tell me to leave,
What did I do to deserve this?

[Pre-Chorus]

Must be my fault, but I can't tell why

[Chorus]

Well maybe I'm just a drama queen,
And my life is just worth what it seems,
I'm a loser who just attention seeks,
So really you should just blame me,
The drama queen

[Bridge]

I appreciate telling me how you feel,
It felt great to hear, at least you’re being real,
I know I’m not the perfect friend,
But how could you mean all those things you said?

[Chorus]

So maybe you’re just a drama queen,
And maybe I’m not as bad as I seem,
I'm not a loser, just confusing, but I can still be sweet,
So really you should not blame me

Or maybe you’re just a loser too,
But at least I’m not as bad as you,
You’re just vein and self obsessed, for once just give it a rest,
And all along you’ve always been,
The drama queen

[Doug Denslowe]

Good idea,like the story it tells.Look,I hate to post anything but positive feedback.That being said,in my opinion,what makes a song a song,and not a poem is the "rhyme".For me it's imperative that songs have a rhythm and rhyme.You're almost there,just fix the lines that don't rhyme or could be improved.I hope you take this in the way it was meant,not a putdown,just a suggestion.Doug