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    Just some **** lyrics inspired by a student forum discussion I am privy too.

    Give a nod and a smile,
    Say your long goodbyes,
    Say you’ll see them in a while,
    Knowing it’s probably lies,

    So what you’ve got no friends,
    So you feel all alone,
    Not a thing in the world,
    Would have you running back home,

    Because we’re going to set this place on fire tonight,

    We’re going to forget why we came here,
    We’re going to sing it to the stars,
    We’ll light it up, when we get free,
    Because we’re all alone now,
    And it’s time to start this year,

    There are books by your bed,
    With the plastic still on,
    That you should probably read,
    But it’ll take you too long,

    Because we’re going to set this place on fire tonight,

    We’re going to forget why we came here,
    We’re going to sing it to the stars,
    We’ll light it up, when we get free,
    Because we’re all alone now,
    And it’s time to start this year,

    There’s nowhere I’d rather be,
    Nothing I’d rather do,
    Than start this year with you,

    We’re going to forget why we came here,
    We’re going to sing it to the stars,
    We’ll light it up, when we get free,
    Because we’re all alone now,
    And it’s time to start this year,
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    I totally disagree with your expletive (****) about this song. "Start This" is far too good to be put down that way. I can follow the meaning; I get it; I feel it; I like it! It's a good song! So quit calling it bad names!
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    This is a really good song you should be proud of your work

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    Aw, thanks, guys :P I wasn't all that taken with them - maybe it was just one of those days.
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    I really like how this flows...very natural in a way. I can almost hear music to this in my head. Great job and very poetic.
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside

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    just a start?? i think this song s very good and meaningful. i like it alot. it flows really well and its great.

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    Aw, thank you guyses :P
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."

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    Katie, dear! WAKE UP! Don't you know you are hearing from several respected songwriters/poets that this is really good?! THAT means something! And you are still poo-poohing it! Your song's NOT a "little nothing." It is Something!

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    Alright, alright! Sheesh, don't want to get on the wrong side of you, ha ha!
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    What are doing up so late?

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    Late? I think we must be in different countries. It's lunch time here :P
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