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Old 01-28-2007, 03:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Hey There Stranger

Oh boy, hear me out;

Something we’ll all wonder
What are we fighting for
Silence fills the room
Shaking our solid walls

I’ll just keep dancing down the street
Tapping my fingers to this beat
Watch me turn the other way
I’m just the girl of your worst dreams

Hey there stranger
I’ll be your exotic dance
Giving you another move
Oh, if only you knew
You’re just another stranger

Flipping throw the pages
What will be your next line
The light shines so bright
Swinging for the stars above

It’s just a hard ball
That keeps coming your way
Step to the side
This girl doesn’t need you another

Hey there stranger
I’ll be your exotic dancer
Giving you another move
Oh if only you know
You’re just another stranger

Now boy, why do you keep doing this
Why, why, why
I’ll going to keep screaming on the inside
Bye, bye, bye

Time keeps passing us by
Moving throw to the other side
Keeping my head held high
I’m just a girl doing it alone

Hey there stranger
I’ll be your exotic dancer
Giving you another move
Oh, if only you know
You’re just another stranger
Hey there stranger

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Old 01-28-2007, 05:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this is something new to me, need any kind of help i can get. please feel free to leave your comments, thoughts, etc. anything will help me improve my writing.

Thanks
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Old 01-30-2007, 10:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
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HI! well first of all ur a relly good writer. i think you shoulkd keep on writing. but wat im wondering is if you write open hearted????? write wit ur feelings and u will become better. i enjoyed reading ur lyrics i hope i can read some more
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