Are my lyrics good?

[lilxmj]

hi can someone please read my lyrics and see if they are good?

I'm just a girl:

There's a few things
i forgot to say to you
so here it goes

you have turned my world around
you made me put my feet back on the ground
you told me
i dont have to dream for hapiness

but i think you need to know that...

[chorus]
i'm just a girl
who's waiting to meet
her mr. right
but i'm afraid to show
who i am inside
and i feel so lonley
oh i'm just a girl

maybe you can set me free
let me be
what i wanna be
then i woke from my dream

oh everything's so wrong
and i'm so alone
thats why i'm singing this song

so i'm gonna let you know that...

[chorus]

nothings ever what it seems
when you live inside your dreams
yeah i just wanna break free
and fly away

yeah you need to know that...

[chorus]


let me know what ya think xx

[dondi]

i like it.

i hear it as having a softer verse that builds up to a powerful chorus.

is that what you were going for?