Your Evil Brown Eyes

[emoskittle66]

Does anyone know if this name has been used before? It sounds un original to me. Anyways, as usualy, critique/criticize my lyrics please. And I will love you forever, here is another exerpt straight from my head

Your Evil Brown Eyes

Theres hatred breeding in me
It has infected me like a weed
Its spreading through me rapidily
I despreately yearn to be freed

I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth, have captured me

And I Hate you!
But I love You!
Just stop all the lies
That pretty mask doesnt do **** for a disguise x2

Your F****ing with my mind
You have on that ever fake disguise
I can see it, in your brown eyes
Whenever you talk to me, they avoid mine

But I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth have trapped me

And I Hate you!
But I love You!
Just stop the lies
That pretty mask doesnt do **** for a disguise x2

Just tell me the truth
Im am so confused
All I want is you
or is that even true
to look me in the eyes
and then to tell me that you love me
to take off that disguise
and placed your hand in mine

as if we still loved each other
or at least we could pretend

But...

I Hate you
But I love you
Just stop the lies
The pretty mask doesn't do **** for a disguise x2


I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth made me fall in love with you.





Ps: I read the forum rules, and it wasn't direct as to weather we could use asterisks but I'm taking a risk, because I wanted that statement in the song to be powerful and forceful and rude, I had no other way to do it.

[elisabethrox312]

wow i love it!!! hehehe, but im serious!!!

[Taboo 13]

ive heard the i hate u i love u part before in songs but other than that it's realy good

[emoskittle66]

Thanks again. And totally, thats what I've realized. It's a bit overused, I was trying to use it, to portray that I was confused with my emotions. But Im sure Ill be able to find another way to do it, I just need to find away that will sound good and stick for a verse.