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Old 03-19-2007, 08:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Smile Wicked Metal Song Please Rate

ok this took me like 15 minutes please tell me how it is

Sum of pain

Deify me,
I dare you to make a move,
Governments got a hold on your soul,
Temptation takes toll,
you've played out your role

Threshold,
Of pain is the game we play,
Please struggle we want it that way,
Dont fight the pain that you bring,
your mind will consume you again.

Bleeding,
The thought of it is to sweet,
for sadistics who roam our streets,
dont bother washing your hands,
the red's flushed through these lands.

Tell me what you see when i ask you to fathom,
A world without pain and suffering,
I see the sum of all pain in the doorway,
and a picture of a man with blood in his hands,
and his soul,
as black as the night that the moon never rises,
Again we will rise
AGAIN WE WILL RISE

The sum of all pain is the nothing we gain,
The sum of all pain will consume us again,
The sum of all pain is the nothing we gain,
The sum of all pain is the nothing we gain.

~ Gawain ~
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Old 03-26-2007, 06:41 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wow...
I think that could be one of your #1s

5/5
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Old 03-26-2007, 06:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks!!! your's arent bad, their definately emotional, but thats what counts
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thx, you should start a band though,
your lyrics are cool
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Old 03-26-2007, 06:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I had a band for a while but im only 16 and i live in a small community so.... finding a band is rather difficult. Im a skilled metal guitarist from Alberta Canada and a lyric writer. I also play drums, basically, music is my life.
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Im still learning, i have a little exp with non-electrics, but metal IS my life

and your lyrics are up in my top 10
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