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Old 03-24-2007, 12:08 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Total Eclipse

Hullo, M's sister speaking. Here is a song that I think is relatively cute, and certainly much cuter when sung, that was written for a ten-minute song contest. Enjoy it. :]

Yes, I wrote 'total eclipse of the moon' instead of lunar eclipse. Because it sounded better. Deal.

Total Eclipse of the Moon
Soup du Jour

Doing my thing,
I've got a song to sing,
You come into sight-
My heart takes flight,

Because you're my own personal helium balloon,
You make me act like a Looney Toon,
I didn't know love could hit so soon,
It's like a total eclipse of the moon.

I can't give you much, as such, but
I'm so excited by your touch that
I can't think straight,
My mind's a little late,
Maybe you're my soulmate,

I only have love to give, but
You're the reason I live, I-
Never knew that I could feel like this and
I can't stop dreaming about your kiss and

You're doing your thing,
You've got your own song to sing
But when you're in my sight,
My heart takes flight

Because you're my own personal helium balloon,
You make me act like a Looney Toon,
I didn't know love could hit so soon,
It's like a total eclipse of the moon.

I don't know how to say it, but
I'm gonna try, I'll try it, try it.
She might walk a thousand miles and
There might not be a mountain high enough and
They all might think love's rough, but-

I know, I know how it is
There's nothing but sunshine like this-!
Sunshine in your arms, your kiss
Sunshine, rainbows and pure bliss!

We're doing our thing,
We've got songs to sing
And when you're in my sight
My heart takes flight

Because you're my own personal helium balloon,
You make me act like a Looney Toon,
I didn't know love could hit so soon,
It's like a total eclipse of the moon.
It's like a total eclipse of the moon!
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Old 03-24-2007, 09:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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lol, its cute! in the "i cant take it seriously and its funny" kind of cute. Dont think it will make it far... but you got some good lyrics scattered in there.
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Old 03-24-2007, 10:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Er...thanks, I guess? Yeah, isn't meant to be anything really serious, of course. I mean, I used 'Looney Toon'. If I meant it to be serious, I would be completely mad. But thank you for that, at least. :] That was pretty much what I was going for.
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lol, im just trying to voice my opinion
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