Untitled maybe co write?

[Devin K]

Maybe someone would like to co/write this one? Could be kinda fun...
If there is any potential that is... If you dont feel for it, please tell me what you think of it so far----Maybe i should do it shorter, yeah give me something to work on, or do some work on it yourself...

GUESS YOUVE BEEN ON MY MIND FOR PRETTY LONG NOW
JUST CANT FIND THE TIME TO HEAR YOUR SIDE OF THE STORY
CAUSE I KNOW IVE HEARD IT ALL BEFORE AND YOUR ALWAYS SORRY
I WILL KEEP THE DOOR SHUT CAUSE YOUR JUST A LITTLE BIT *****Y
BUT SOMEHOW A CAN SEE RIGHT TROUGH YOU KNOW AND IT MAKES YOU ANGRY

THE WELL WRITTEN LIES ARE SEEPING THROUG THE FLOOR
SOMETHING I JUST CANT IGNORE AND YOU CANT FIND THE BACKDOOR
I GUESS ITS UP TO ME TO BRING THIS CHAPTER TO ITS END
STOP THIS THING FROM HEADING TO ANOTHER DEAD END
FIND THE KEY TO UNLOCK YOUR INFECTED BRAIN AND STOP YOUR PRETEND

[SpudMunky]

Hiya! I can see that this song has potential, there may be bits that I'd possibly move around, do you mind if I have a play around with the lyrics, I can't promise anything and I'll probably make it worse but I could have a look for you? Also i don't think it needs to be any shorter, that's the shortest that you'd want that to be!

[Devin K]

Hey
I dont mind you moving around, i give you free hands on this one. Its kind of a experiment, and i love playing around with lyrics. I have 2 bands that i sometimes write to. And im working double time on this lyrics. One of my projects is maybe to find someone to co-write with, always looking for someone who would like to do this. You know, maybe find a new angle and hopefully find a thing that is new and maybe help my local bands on the rise, or why not a band somewhere out there in this big music world...
If you find this interesting, it would be great...If you like you can add me on your MSN....

Very interested of what or how this one will turn out...
And of course your name will be shown if this one finds a way to a band, and if there is any money, (wich i dont think at the moment) you will get your share.
Hope you understand my bad english and understand what im trying to say...
Like i said, im pretty new on this and im just working on a webbpage to promote my stuff...so...if you have any questions dont hesitate to contact me...

Puh, this was long...I have one question to you, where do you live??

Thanks again

[SpudMunky]

Hiya i've sent you a pm