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Old 04-17-2007, 10:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Born To Lose

BORN TO LOSE

I don’t know
Why I feel this way
Why I hate you
What is there to say
Feel this pain
Hear my beating heart
Faster and faster
Now we drift apart

Born to lose
Live to win
Take away the pain within
You’re story ends
Your time is up
Living fast, dying young

Feel how I feel
See how things should be
Thoughts in my mind
Something less than real
Now you see me
Standing before you
I won’t back down
Hell I’ll put you through

Born to lose
Live to win
Take away the pain within
You’re story ends
Your time is up
Living fast, dying young

Running fast
Run through hell and back
Don’t turn around
Demons of your past
No more hatred
Nothing left but me
Is this real?
Is this how things should be?

Sacrifice all you know

Born to lose
Live to win
Take away the pain within
You’re story ends
Your time is up
Living fast, dying young

Any feedback? Ta

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Old 04-17-2007, 03:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Im Just...you Know I Like It, Cant Find Anything To Complain About. Its Short And Powerful... Nice Going!
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Old 04-19-2007, 05:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi! I quite like those lyrics, they're short but sweet, I like the fact that the last verse brings you back to the beginning just tying it up nicely, so you end on finish with the original theme. I like the fact that even though it is short, punchy lines, which will have a real impact on the listener, there is depth to the lyrics. Good use of rhythm!
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Old 04-21-2007, 12:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it, i like it a lot, it's strong "Born to lose live to live to win" is my problem, i think it should be "Born to die and Die to Live" or something, but that was Nice... I like it, it's hott...
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Old 04-21-2007, 03:12 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Running fast
Run through hell and back
Don’t turn around
Demons of your past
No more hatred
Nothing left but me
Is this real?
Is this how things should be?

i liked that part nice
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Old 04-24-2007, 09:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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hey it's good but run to hell and back is more wit hthe beat !GJ!
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"Born To Lose" is a well-used song title: Born to lose lyrics - Google Search
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