Fate

[Lovenotez07]

Every time I close my eyes
All the memories I see
Times of laughter,love and sharing
Never a moment without caring
How I long to hold you in my arms
And tell you it's ok
How I wish that I could tell you
Just exactly how I feel
How much I do love you
And how much I really care
Some may say it's too late
To express my love for you
But I believe in miracles
Especially one called fate
I know somethimes when you love someone
You've got to let them go
So if it's really meant to be
Then my heart will call you home.

Geneva R. Patterson
Copyright ©2007 Geneva Patterson

[SpudMunky]

Hi there! Those lyrics are really good there's nothing there that I would change with those! They're really meaningful lyrics, very powerful! What music are you planning on putting that to, it's just would that lengthen the song or is it going to be a short song, just out of curiosity?

[Lovenotez07]

Thank you so much, I never really thought about it I know I want to set these words to music just I want to try playing with the words to set it for more of a song lyric pattern. I'm sure I will--I have serveral others that started out this way and turned out fairly good.

[SpudMunky]

You're welcome! I would agree these have turned out very well! They're very clear on the message that they are giving out, even if people have no experience in the theme of your song they will still be able to relate to them, as I mentioned before they are very powerful, you understand fully the feelings being portrayed, and it all flow very well so no it would appear you have found a method that works for you!