Your Not His Star Tonight

[yourlifestorywales]

It started with a broken heart
Neglected from the attention it deserved
But now you’ll never get to hear
What those other people heard

This song is for you
It won’t do any justice
But it’s about the things that you do
It’s about the things that have happened
And the things I have gone through
Since the day that I first set sights on you

Understanding’s just the start
When losing half your heart
Moments disappear as quick as they came
And you know that your to blame
There’s just no point in them telling you
It’s not your fault
Cause inside is yelling
“You failed them all”

And he writes in his diary
For the last time
Without her by his side
And as tears of freedom roll onto his cheek
He knows the future is forever looking meek

As he boards the taxi home
He sees you, and your not alone
As he slumps in his seat
He knows he’s blown it
He knows he is beat
For God’s sake
He’s drinking Jack Daniels neat!

And he looks up to the stars
But you’re not his star tonight
You’re someone else’s light

He’s depressed, he’ll never get to see you in that dress
That smile is lost tonight
He’s loving you more, rather than less

You were always in a relationship
Never single for long
It’s true when they say that the best are always taken
I was mistaken to waste half my life
On a dream that wasn’t going to happen

Perhaps you’ll never really know how much I loved you
Perhaps you’ll never get to know the things that I’d like to do
But it’s time, I have to stop loving you
Cause you’re gone now, your just a song
But you’ll always be beautiful

[SpudMunky]

Hiya, these lyrics are really well written, I can find no fault with them, they're really heartfelt and you can really identufy with the character, you feel what the person is feeling! Very good!

[rawchord]

hi wales
i think this is very heart felt but it feels to personnel you are writing your own feelings
so what if this love has left, its there loss,
i think to write a (love song) you need too distance yourself and try and write about someone else i find it easier to write about my friends breakups then it seems to flow much better
thats just the way i do it and believe me i've had heartache
never bare your soul to strangers x

[yourlifestorywales]

Originally Posted by rawchord

hi wales
i think this is very heart felt but it feels to personnel you are writing your own feelings
so what if this love has left, its there loss,
i think to write a (love song) you need too distance yourself and try and write about someone else i find it easier to write about my friends breakups then it seems to flow much better
thats just the way i do it and believe me i've had heartache
never bare your soul to strangers x

Well just wanted to say that all my songs do not come from personal experiences, i'm only 17, I havent gone through anything yet, this is just the start of my life. I think of scenario's that I can write about and whatever comes , comes. just wanted you to know that. SAM

[rawchord]

thats great news
the lyrics made me feel like it was your real expierience, wich means you have achieved wat we all try to do, reach the reader
excellent

ps sorry didnt mean to seem horible had a few bevs that nite