All The Lyrics.com       Forum       Register       Members      User CP      Calendar       Search       FAQ             Music Journal

Go Back   Lyrics Forum > SONGS > Lyrics Review

Sponsored Links
Register

and you will see
NO ads!
Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes

Old 05-21-2007, 03:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Wales - UK
Reputation: 16
Default Engraved In My Statue

ENGRAVED IN MY STATUE

As I lie down
I try to exhale you out
Of my system
But you won’t breakout
Why the hell do I need you?
Is this part of my virtue?

As I fall down
So do you
Cause you’re with me
Engraved in my statue
Why won’t you go?
This is breaking me down

You’ve been the problem in my life
Since the time we first locked eyes
Now I’m drowning in my lies
You’ve got me caught up in your ties

You’ve been the problem in my life
Since the time we first locked eyes
Now I’m drowning in my lies
You’re my curse, You’re not my prize

I have to stop loving you
It’s tearing me apart
But always keep in mind
You’ll forever be my sweetheart

And it’s not your fault
I just can’t set myself back to default

You’ve been the problem in my life
Since the time we first locked eyes
Now I’m drowning in my lies
I’ve got caught up in your ties

You’ve been the problem in my life
Since the time we first locked eyes
Now I’m drowning in my lies
I’m the curse, and you’re my prize
yourlifestorywales is offline   Reply With Quote

Old 05-22-2007, 04:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: uk
Reputation: 10
you've been a problem in my life
since the time we first locked eyes

you say things like this then

but always keep me in mind
you'll forever be my sweetheart

i feel you'll regret these words if he or she ever reads them
you must move on
time is a great healer
it doesnt feel like now but honest it is
rawchord is offline   Reply With Quote

Old 05-23-2007, 04:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
Senior Member
 
SpudMunky's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Reputation: 16
Hi there! Those lyrics are really well written, they come across as very personal, which I find to be the most powerful type of writing, as the feelings, thoughts and story are automatically there! But to actually comment on the lyrics written these are beautiful, very well put together and well worded!
__________________
Do you serve a purpose or purposely serve?
SpudMunky is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Register

and you will see
NO ads!


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules



All times are GMT -6. The time now is 12:37 AM.
Lyrics | Lyrics search | Music directory | Register | FAQ | Members List | Calendar | Today's Posts | Search | New Posts |
 
Contact us
Copyright ©2002 - 2006 All The Lyrics .com


vbulletin skin developed by: eXtremepixels
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.6.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 3.0.1