Summer

[Kates_Agony]

Can you feel that ocean breeze?
Feel the raging sun rising overhead?
Taste the beginning of the summer?
Hear the roar of the waves?
Is it alright to runaway,
Say goodbye?

Chorus:

Because the summer's here
And I can't let go
All that I fear
Is coming back so..
The memories of last summer
Take over my mind,
Take over my emotions
And I just gotta get away

Dreams of every perfect night
Drift over my head
Out of my mind
But the nightmares
Of every ****ing fight
Seem to just stay
Suffocating, intoxicating
So is it alright to runaway,
Say goodbye?

Chorus

The pain is too intense
The memories all too clear
I hope you're happy
Seeing the mess you made
I hope you know
You're not welcome back

Chorus

And there's so much to say
I hope SHE's happy
Flaming hearts torn in two
So ripped and scarred
But we'll be okay
Just gotta get away

[sparks]

the opening stanza is just plain good, the imagery was perfect.
the chorus wasn't so hot, but it wasn't awful either.

Why did you have to..
Be like that?
Pull me back up
Then just go ahead
And let me fall again?
I hope you're happy
Seeing the mess you made
I hope you know
You're not welcome back
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

that seemed a little cliche to me.

overall it's alright, there's some really good lines in there.

[Kates_Agony]

Yeah, I don't like that part as much either. >.> I just got writer's block then.

I like the beginning as well..I'll probably have to agree with you. I'm really new at writing lyrics, but I'm learning.
Thanks

[SpudMunky]

Hey there! Those lyrics are really good! I think that they work really well! Very well done!

[Krent_Calstro777]

It's quite expressionable, I like your way of words and imagry. ^^ when I've read it, a melody popped up in my head but there a word that did bump the road was "****ing" but i know you meant the fight is irritated, fed up though lol.
this song is what happening to my cousin recently he runaway too.. for 2 weeks! lol