Revert

[Transit.letum]

Today is the day I die,
You can't look me in the eye?

How could you do this?
You broke my heart.
Can't fix this with a kiss,
Some things you can't kick-start.

Say it isn't so,
Please don't go.
This doesn't have to end,
Just don't do it again!
We can forget the past.
We can make this last!

How could you do this?
You broke my heart.
Can't fix this with a kiss,
Some things you can't kick-start.

NO!
I don't want to know his name.
NO!
I don't want to play this game.
Just sit down,
Let me think.
I ****ing hate this town,
I need a drink.

How could you do this?
You broke my heart.
Can't fix this with a kiss,
Some things you can't kick-start.

Look at these tears!
After all these years!
Maybe you're right,
I don't wanna fight,
Get outta my sight!
Don't come back!
I don't wanna see you again.
Your things will be packed,
Send your cute friend.

How could you do this?
You broke my heart.
Can't fix this with a kiss,
Some things you can't kick-start.

She's down the street, outta sight,
Someone undo this night.
Perverts and short skirts,
Some things you can't revert.

How could you do this?
You broke my heart.
Can't fix this with a kiss,
Some things you can't kick-start.

Perverts and short skirts,
Some things you can't revert.


Any suggestions/ criticism is welcome and appreciated, thanks.

[SOULstice]

This could easily be a very good song. Just needs good music. I like the innuendo with the "I need a drink" and "Send your cute friend" I think you should end it with the first line, or maybe a play on the first line, like :
"And I can't look you in the eye,
Today is the day I die"