Bleeding Life Away

[wowpoker]

It starts as a ripple
life begins to fade
the effect triples
cursing the choices you made

bleeding life away
terror makes the world sway
pouring all the color out
the world can’t hear your shout

running water going down
the once great mind starts to drown
falling down nowhere to be found
falling down not making a sound

bleeding life away
terror makes the world sway
pouring all the color out
the world can’t hear your shout

everything is nothing
the world caught you bluffing
you thought you had it understood
the chaos has you for good

bleeding life away
terror makes the world sway
pouring all the color out
the world can’t hear your shout

searching for more than just a dream
things are more than they seem
truth forgotten justice destroyed
army after army now deployed
blood falling on the dirt
the earth itself starts to hurt

bleeding life away
terror makes the world sway
pouring all the color out
the world can’t hear your shout

destruction explosions chaos ensue
there isn’t much that we can do
I can’t breathe I’m turning blue
terror, chaos, insanity too
death is nothing, nothing new!

Written by,
-Alex Johnson

[MarcoB]

Oh my god ! ! ! Beautifull written ! ! ! I have read two song of you, i am already your fan! What can i say, it touches me your lyrics, the beste feeling that there is in the world, if you ask me! Greets Marco

[wowpoker]

Thanks alot man, thanks for reading/posting on all my lyrics.

[MarcoB]

You are welcome! It's the truth, great job!

[noaht12321]

Cool Tell me though R they hardcore Or A Soft Band Or What

[MarcoB]

Originally Posted by noaht12321

Cool Tell me though R they hardcore Or A Soft Band Or What

Hey noaht,

There isn't a band which plays this song . wowpoker wrote these lyrics himself . Which he did wonderful!

[Spring]

Well done wowpoker!

[noaht12321]

Ok well umm.. can I use them because they are really cool and my band is only up to five songs.

[petrochik]

Well I gotta be honest with you. Even though the song has a good rhyme and everything there seems to be something wrong with your story. You jump from one subject to another and it doesn't add up.

I can’t breathe I’m turning blue

It is clear over here that you used the blue just because it rhymes. why would you turn blue? Why cant you breathe?

This is just my opinion don't get offended. My opinion is that your song has nothing behind it.

[wowpoker]

When your deprived of oxygen(when you can't breathe) for long enough your face starts to turn a little blue. The song is about terror, chaos, destruction, war, and death. I wasn't literally saying that I couldn't breathe in the song. It's meant to be taken that all the chaos, insanity, destruction, and death in life was too much to the point that it was "suffocating" me.

Most lyrics go misunderstood. I know I probably don't understand the meaning behind a lot of lyrics whether i think i do or not. To me this song makes perfect sense, but that's probably because i wrote it.

However if it doesn't make sense to you then i am sorry i couldn't portray the meaning to you better.

-Alex

[noaht12321]

I really want 2 use the lyrics! You don't have to say yes but it would be really cool if you did