And it’s serene
In the silence of the heavy falling snow
All alone
Leaving all the things he used to know
In the cabin his tears freeze
He wants you to know…
It’s not your fault
Stop the blaming and forget
The things you’ve done
This damn regret
He’s broken
He lays on the floor unable to talk
Just thinking
Of how you ripped his heart apart
In the cabin his tears freeze
He just wants you to know…
It’s not your fault
Stop the blaming and forget
The things you’ve done
This damn regret
It’s not your fault
Stop the blaming and forget
The things you’ve done
This damn regret
It’s not your fault
It’s not your fault
He wants you to know
It’s not your fault
It’s not your fault
Stop the blaming and forget
The things you’ve done
This damn regret
It’s not your fault
Stop the blaming and forget
The things you’ve done
This damn regret
I think it's a lot of the same, 5 refrains, and the 2 couplettes are kinda much like each other too. You should add some more diversity. Even though it has some feeling, It's kinda cool at first but it started to bore me.
Hey there! Those lyrics are really well written but I do have to agree with soosa, they do need some more verses somewhere to break the lyrics up a bit more to give more interest, but otherwise those lyrics are really well written!
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