It sounds nice Petro. I bet it's made for a band (song). I like it, I find some common things with what I write. For a song it's great. Tou tried to make a career with this ? Honestly ! Search a band or smth like that and work it out. Believe me. I still write songs for a person, he's a folk singer.
I wrote youin the "Hallo" and I didn't see this. Well, I like it. Hope to see from you and some poems. (sorry, but this is not a poem for me, is just a song)
Keep in touch my friend
