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Old 08-16-2007, 06:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Beautiful Girl

everytime i come around you get that sexy look on your face (on your face)
you're the type of girl that no one could ever replace (ever replace)
pretty face, sexy thang, something no one could ever change (ever change)
now i'm losssssstttt....
in your eeyyyess

(hook)
now i cant lie
that everytime
i come around you i get butterflies
could it beeee your face
or that perrrfect waist
now i cant lie
that everytime
i come around you i get butterflies
could it be your faaaaaaace
or your waiiiiiiist

Now you're lookin at me, and im lookin at you
the vision of us could it be so true (soooo truee)
every single time i come around you (come around you)
my words gets lost and i dont know what to do
baby giiiiirlll..
i want you to be my worrrrrrlllld..

(hook)

(bridge)
how could i ever get you right here next to me? (next to me)
i could serenade you with my song or jus buy u a drink (buy u a driiiink)
you're beautiful face, sleek slim waist
i dont know what to say cause they're drivin me insane
now giiiiirlll..could i just get your naaaaaaammme..

(extra verse)
now she's noticin me from across the room
this is my chance to make a move
i slide right over and i take a seat
i introduce myself.. Hi my name is Glenn B.
laughin and talkin is what we got goin onnnnn (going onnn)
i hope this moment lasts all night long..
NOW..

(hook #2)
you're smilin at me and i'm smilin at you
gettin lost in your eyes is what im goin through
you're beautiful face and your so soft skin
let me ask you whats your name girlfriend?!
cauuseee i...
finally met someone riiiiiighttt..

baby girl....

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Old 08-19-2007, 10:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi there! Those lyrics are really good! The only thing I would say is that you may want the word serenade, rather than seranate. But otherwise I think that those lyrics are really good, and depending upon the tune, could become a big song, played everywhere!
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Old 08-19-2007, 03:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks!! oh and i changed the word haha..

i dont really take too much time in writing my songs..i basically hear a tune, or another song that i really like and then when i write something..its either a true experience or something that i'm going through.

but thanks for the reply!
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Old 08-20-2007, 11:15 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Lol! You're welcome! Thats good then! That style of writing tends to turn out better than something that is planned and really thought about, also it makes it available to a wider audience! I like it!
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Old 09-02-2007, 01:30 PM   #5 (permalink)
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You`ve helped me a lot: My friend has some problems with his girlfriend. He can use your lyrics idea and describe it in his own words.
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Old 09-02-2007, 01:32 PM   #6 (permalink)
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can`t he? - write me...
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