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Old 08-19-2007, 05:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default If You're hurt Satisfaction can't be far away

If You're Hurt Satisfaction Can't Be Far Away by Ash Red Saturday

Child Chanting:
betrayel never felt so good you say,
smiling as you walk away
death is love, and love is death
never again will you forget.

Chorus:
Wash away the tears and pain
through that bottle of champaigne
while you laugh at the state you left me in
the knife that's jabbed right through my skull
will no longer be lonely again

Verse 1
You should be shamed that
I'm not so alive and that you'll clean
my blood off your hands tonight
I won't be so easy to put down
so you better watch your back

Chorus:
wash away the tears and pain
through that bottle of champaigne
while you laugh at the state you left me in
the knife that's jabbed right through my skull
will no longer be lonely again

Verse 2
Walk with me and take a risk
the hands of death turn into fists
feel my face as it is only darkness
will you walk away alive
or will join me tonight

Chorus:
Wash away the tears and pain
throug that bottle of champaigne
while you laugh at the state you left me in
the knife that's jabbed right through my skull
will no longer be lonely again

Bridge
Don't you see what you've done?
Don't you see what you've done.
I cannot breath and my limbs are stiff
and your taking the midnight shift!

Chorus
Wash away the tears and pain
through that bottle of champaigne
while you laugh at the stae you left me in
the knife that's jabbed right through my skull
will no longer be lonely again

COME ON!

Chorus (I'm not going to write it again!)

I can't Believe you did this
I can't believe.....
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Old 08-20-2007, 05:20 AM   #2 (permalink)
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awsome imagery.
The start of the chorus is pretty catchy too

Wash away the tears and pain
through that bottle of champaigne
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Old 08-20-2007, 11:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow awesome lyrics! I love them! Such depth and anger in them conveyed easily in your writing! I love the title, thats great and I love the idea of children chanting that first part, it would sound really eerie and fit in with the rest of the lyrics! Very clever and very well written!
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