Does Falling out of a fiftieth Story window always feel so good?

noaht12321 · 08-19-2007, 05:38 PM

Does Falling out of a fiftieth story window always feel so good? by Ash Red Saturday

Falling, I'm just Falling!
The air sweeps through my hair
as the rush follows me down..
Falling, Past the windows,
the windows From fifty to one!

As I fall down I think of you and me
I think of the time it was 5 past three!
As I think now I see how you just cry out
Why did I Do This...

I love you but not enough it seems
I hope that you never forget me
my body's falling through the air
I'm almost wishing you were here

Watch me as I fall
and your face turns from fear into a half smile
you think of the times that I was never there
you think of the times that you had almost KILLED ME RIGHT ON THE SPOT!

I love you but not enough it seems
I hope that you never forget me
my Body's falling through the air
I'm almost wishing you were here

I know your happy on the inside
you never loved anyway
it wasn't easy go through with this
but when I had my doubts
I'd think of you
OF YOU!
YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love you but not enough it seems
I hope that you never forget me
My body's falling through the air
I'm almost wishing
I'm almost wishing
I'm almost wishing you were here

It's almost time for impact
my time is closing in
I just want to tell you
I'm happy I'll never see you again

wowpoker · 08-19-2007, 06:01 PM

Pretty good lyrics, everything seems to flow pretty well. I'm personally not into the suicide themed songs but thats just me.

noaht12321 · 08-19-2007, 06:30 PM

It's not suicide it's a experience story. I once fell out of a Fiftieth story window but survived very luckily. The accident occured at a hotel that didn't have gardening staff so the bushes were overgrown and I landed on the bushes.
It is the only thing close to death I have ever had happen in my life. I was also in bad terms with my girlfriend. I just kinda twisted up the story a little bit and walla! A sad song that is appealing to the skaters and rockers of Austin and Marble falls.

wowpoker · 08-19-2007, 06:59 PM

Wow man thats insane. Well I'm glad you lived haha. Keep writing!

SpudMunky · 08-20-2007, 12:08 PM

Hi there! Very well written lyrics, and you can almost feel the air rushing past you as you fall, you feel the emotion, and the sort of thoughts that would be going through your mind as yoour faling, it's insightful! Very clever! You can feel everything that is described! Brilliant!

noaht12321 · 08-20-2007, 12:59 PM

Do you serve a purpose or purposely serve?

What do you mean by that

SpudMunky · 08-22-2007, 11:40 AM

Lol! It's a line I heard in a song, and I liked it so I used it in my signature! In my understanding I guess it means do you actually have a purpose of your own that you are fulfilling or are you actually just serving somebody elses purpose, but making it seem like it's you own?