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Old 08-28-2007, 07:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Arrow Truth In The Lies

In relationships a lot of times, words are said to one another about how they feel ,for each other. Sometimes out of protection for the others feelings, and other times for protection of ones self. There comes the moments when words just aren’t enough. It’s then that you realize what you relationship is based around.

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@ 5/29/07 Lyneva Starbuck
Written by Lyneva Starbuck
Music by Frank Marinko

You’re sick, of all my lies
You say, there’s no compromise
My words, don’t mean a thing
And you’re waking up from a bad dream

Tell me, what I want to hear
Show me, I have nothing to fear
Give me, some kind of sign
And I’ll give you everything that’s mine

When the words are only words weathered in time
And the comfort that we feel is deep inside

How can you say you love me more than more than life
Where’s the truth in all the lies
How can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
That’ll be the truth in all our lies
How can your love for me be more than this
Where’s the truth in all the lies
Can we go on pretending its gonna be alright

Tell me, what you want from me
Show me, if you want me to see
Give me, the dreams of your youth
And let me become your living proof

You’re sick, of all my lies
You say, there’s no compromise
My words, don’t mean a thing
And you’re waking up from a bad dream

When the words are only words weathered in time
And the comfort that we feel is deep inside

How can you say you love me more than more than life
Where’s the truth in all the lies
How can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
That’ll be the truth in all our lies
How can you love for me be more than this
Where’s the truth in all the lies
Can we go on pretending its gonna be alright

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Old 09-01-2007, 03:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi there! These lyrics are so good! I love them. It sounds like it's coming from experience and even if it's not there are still alot of people who can relate to it still. Great quality of writing, very expressive and a theme that didn't get confused at any point! Very nice
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Old 09-05-2007, 10:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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you should writte Where´s the truth in all THOSE lies it´s better to hear, but that´s your text you can do everything you want it´s just my opinion

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Old 09-18-2007, 06:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I really liked your lyrics. I think anyone can relate to the experience of telling the other what they want to hear, but that may not be necessarily the truth. Great theme, and great lyrics.
Ah! Maybe the second time it is repeated you could change the line "Can we go on pretending it´s gonna be alright?" into "Can we go on pretending this is not a lie?" or something of the sort. Hope you find this suggestion useful!
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Old 09-27-2007, 12:42 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks guy for the reviews so far. We try to write songs that make people think and relate or just smile to themselves. Even have a couple that question the present government. Music in our book should move and do things without force. We are analyzing your suggestion and they are greatly noted. Thanks.
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