Drama

[hannahbanana]

best friends turning on each other
pickin at your every imperfection
sayin that your hairs to frizzy
sayin that your way to fat
what the heck is up with that

emo goth prep jock
wont this madness ever stop
black red pink blue
ya thats right we see right through

stopping pain inside is hard
leaving fear behind just started
so how am i suppost to live
without the one who always forgives

[GlennB.]

i like this. you just need to make it a bit longer. and your second paragraph..i would totally use it as a chorus/hook. i picture this as a puink rock song. as in the verses would have a nice melody...then the chorus really picks up to match the words...i like it... good job!