I'll Be Yours, You'll Be Mine (NEW SONG!)

[GlennB.]

everytime i come around u want me
we could just take this love thing slowly
cause baby u dont really know me
now all u gotta do is show me (show me)
everytime you come around i want you
got me hypntoized can i jus flaunt u?
confused, im lost, dont know what to do?
how can i get to you?!


you're beautiful eyes
got me mezmerzied
i wanna get to know u baby i cannot lie
come with me and ill take you to paradise
ill be yours and youll be mine

(chorus)
we could go on a trip
take a plane and just dip
shawty leave this all behiiind
baby you aint gotta trip
you know that i always got it
ill be yours and then youll be miiine


shawty u gotta let me know
whats the deal, are we on the low?
baby girl i just gotta know
do we move fast? or do we take things slow?! (take things sloowww)
visions of us together
baby it couldnt get no better
i wrote you this love letter
jus to let you knooooww!

your beautiful eyes
got me mezmerized
i wanna get to know u baby i cannot lie
come with me and ill take you to paradise
ill be yours and youll be mine

(chorus- 2x)



end notes:

i really want someone to perform some of my songs, cause i cannot sing lol. any up for it?

[Luvya]

Do you just write the lyrics or are there melodies for your songs? What kind of music are they/should they be?
I like this one, it has an original subject not just the usual "i love you so much blabla" Some rhymes are a bit weak (e.g. want me - slowly) but it depends on the music whether this matters or not.

Luvya

[GlennB.]

well, i will hear a song on the radio or on a cd of mine and the melody from that song is stuck in my head. so then i use it to write songs. i usually need a melody in order for me to write, its kinda hard writing without a tune

and by the way, thank u for the verse and chorus.

oh and yes i know sometimes the rhyming is a bit weak but it gets kinda tough using the same rhyming words more than 4 times in a row

[Luvya]

I work the other way round...a phrase would pop up in my head and then I continue writing, the music finds its way automatically. I'm even singing phone numbers to memorize them