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Old 09-13-2007, 02:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default help me finish it n do u like it?

i feel so unsure
about my sanity
am i insane or
am i just struggling

ive been through
everything you
can imagine

been trapped in
this life i know
that i dont belong
because i

feel so uncertian
about my sanity
runnin and dodging
a past youd
never believe
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Old 09-13-2007, 03:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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lets try a girl/guy duet..

what u wrote..GIRL..

what im about to write..GUY.. ok? lol

here we go..

(guy verse)
Sanity...
help bring it back to me
i'm lost in a maze, not caring about my life
God please could you make things riiiight

My past is haunting me
i feel so damn unsure
been through so many things
i wish it was all a blur

now i'm stuck in the middle
of being crazy
i've lost you again
but i want you back baby
just tell me how i can change my past
i wanna move on
but i jus cannttt

(i think this is your chorus..it should be done on this part with guy and girl singing)
(chorus-guy/girl)
I feel so uncertain (feel so uncertain babyy)
about my sanity (abbout..MY..sanniiityy)
running and dodging
a past youd never believe (never believe)


sooo..what do u think?
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