New Songwriter.. Need Opinions!

[harmony079]

These are links, I don't have time to post them all.. Well, I'm kind of new to songwriting, so please rate and/or give opinions and suggestions. Be honest!! I would like a little criticism too so I could find ways to get better. Just so you know, some of these are just poems and I plan on making them into songs. Thanks!





SIW Version 2

Sometimes I Wonder - Version 2 by ~harmony079 on deviantART


Shadow

Shadow by ~harmony079 on deviantART


Would You Still Love Me

Would You Still Love Me by ~harmony079 on deviantART


Untitled

Umm... by ~harmony079 on deviantART


SIW Version 1

Sometimes I Wonder - Version 1 by ~harmony079 on deviantART