Count 10 [Please comment!]

[Ninja TK]

Alright, here's a song that I just made.. I kinda like it, but I want to get other opinions. So keep in mind, this is about wrestlers. I know, weird right? Ok, for the song.

-Count 10-

The count goes to ten,
falling down,
you cant win.
All you have to do is say the words,
that you're giving in.
Dont be afraid,
you can give it another spin.
But be careful,
to not stumble again.

Get back on your feet,
Raise up!
Dont accept defeat,
Dont give up!

You lay there in a daze,
wondering why everything is hazed.
"What does it feel like,
down on the ground?"
He said while looking down,
You come to your senses,
realize where you are,
you then get up and start fighting some more.

Get back on your feet,
Raise up!
Dont accept defeat,
Dont give up!

Fading into the light,
you think its over,
as if there was a winner.
The lights let up,
he runs at you again,
rage boiling up from within.
Then it all starts over,
your body wearing thin.

Get back on your feet,
Raise up!
Dont accept defeat,
Dont give up!
Get back on your feet,
Raise up!
Dont accept defeat,
Dont give up!

© Copyright 2007 Trent Witt

That's it, comments please?!

[Ninja TK]

Oh come on! NO one has anything to say to this? PLease, someone give some constructive criticism.

[Adrienne]

Hmmm very interesting. Why did you write about wrestlers anyway?
Count 10, i love the title..
It should be some rap style song ?

I like this part: Get back on your feet,
Raise up!
Dont accept defeat,
Dont give up!

it's kinda related to everyday life, not only to wrestling

anyway, good work

[Ninja TK]

Yes, it has a rap element to it. The Verses and Bridge are rap.

[Hottttttie12]

Wow these lyrics are really good! i really like the part
Getback on your feet,
Raise up!
Don't accept defeat,
Don't give up!

it sound cool! Great Job