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Old 10-22-2007, 04:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default My Lyrics

What do you think about my lyrics? I made them quite quickly. They are my very first and I'm only 13 so please don't be too harsh! Thanks.

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CHORUS

I'm just me,
Nothing else,
Stop pushing me around,
I can do it myself.

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This is where,
I can share,
A story of my own.

Letter by letter,
I feel no better,
I'm stranded and unknown.

It started one day,
There I lay,
Thinking about life.

I got out of bed,
Depressed and unfed,
Tempted by the knife.

CHORUS X2

Got into my car,
Not too far,
Fell asleep on my chair.

Wanna know why,
Each day I cry,
My heart has a big tear.

It isn't easy,
Watching this TV,
Without you by my side.

You walked out the door,
Left me all poor,
All the time you'd lied.

CHORUS X2

Now look at me,
Like I've lost a key,
I have nowhere to go.

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