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Old 11-04-2007, 12:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Post lyrics.....rapture

blue grey sky,saw tha moon cry,in all tha confusion,it was only n illusion,pulled up a chair,started ta stare,stars are dancin,no more romancin,where is tha love from up above.....lookin back at life,really miss my wife,she used ta shine,like a red wine,lifes not forever,wish we were together,thoughts on my mind,ov a different kind,where is tha love from up above.....dressed in lace,remember her face,she's gone away,come back sum day,worth tha wait,its not too late,wake up in ya sleep,pain feels deep,where is tha love,from up above.....pretty bad dream,ya no what i mean,have a drink,started ta think,say a prayer,maybe she'll care,dont worry,feelin sorry,where is tha love,from up above.....time will tell,try not ta dwell,ya got a serve,ya didn't deserve,its not too bad,dont feel sad,loves for keeps,miss ya heaps,where is tha love,from up above,,,where is tha love from up above.....
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Old 11-04-2007, 01:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I am pretty sure people would leave more comments, if you would put sentences more separately. It is extremely hard to read right now... I do get your style of writing, but still...very hard to read

My honest opinion:

This lyrics here:
blue grey sky,saw tha moon cry,
in all tha confusion,it was only n illusion,
pulled up a chair,started ta stare,
stars are dancin,no more romancin,
where is tha love from up above...


very creative! i like!
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Old 11-04-2007, 01:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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okay ,thanks, mick
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