Unchained...Unleashed(Full of the Spirit)

Restoration · 11-13-2007, 07:07 AM

mind framed changed
flesh has been tamed...

and only by 1 name......Jesus

not looking for the easiest route to take
I DON'T Want No Fame....

i want you(all) to feel the GOSPEL....
it aint't what i spoke...

but i wrote this hear with the Spirit...

GOD must wanted ya'll to hear it
so tell me do you hear it....do you hear it?...

the Gospel sensation
God's creation Adam and Eve....

the devil deceived, so our sin nature has a need
for money, greed and everything our eyes see....

can i tell you what i see...

J E S U S

the man who died for me...

i can't follow man cause man has lied to me
and guided me in the wrong direction.....

the choice was mine i chose what "they" were representin...
now i be a representative of the most relevant source of information....

let "they" be the devil's kid...

i know it's selfish but understand this proclamation....

I'm Out To Face My Own .......Salvation

-Amen
-Restoration in your Eardrum

MastersA · 11-27-2007, 07:24 PM

Restoration,
This concerns you more than this specific poem. I've skimmed a few of your lyrics and read this one, and it seems that you have common theme of spreading the gospel. Generally, you're just jumping around from idea to idea making rhymes here and there and I have a suggestion. Instead of stringing together a bunch a religious ideas people have probably already heard from Christians, why not write a song in parable, like Jesus the parables Jesus told his disciples. Try to come up with a cohesive story the represents why we should love others or the consequences of sin.
Good luck!

Restoration · 11-29-2007, 05:47 PM

ayo...good looking!!! i feel where you comin with that. i have many songs written, only a few, like 15 are copywritten and actually being worked on in my home studio and at my boys studio, (The Mixx), check his myspace page.

anyway i just wanted to say, 'preciate tha love homie.

-in Christ
-Restoration

Krent_Calstro777 · 12-06-2007, 09:18 PM

ah... i c, so you're in a band and quite a sum of lyrics? not bad but of course in average it get progress in 2 years ro so.