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Old 11-13-2007, 12:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Girl In My Home Class

i sit down in my desk
taking a deep breath
i, stumble on some words
you look at me and smile
ive waited for awhile
to say these things to you
im so in love with you
im just hoping you feel the same way too

(chorus)
She's so sweet, she's so hot
Girls, would give anything for what shes got
im mezmerized and don't know why
i look sooo deep in your eyes
she's waiting for me to, say the first words
im trying to say something, she hasn't yet heard
will i do it? or will i passs?
all i know is..
i fell for the girl in my home class

so beautiful that words
couldnt describe how you look
it feels like you just took
a piece of my heart
how can i say this
without bein so nervous
i just can't take it
so here it goes..

HEY..

(chorus- slightly changed)
You're so sweet, you're so hot
all these girls would give anything for what you got
im mezmerized and dont know why
i keep lookin deep into your eyes
i know you were waiting for me, to say these first words
have i said something, you havent yet heard?
i finally did this, i just hope you don't laugh
all i know is..
you're the girl i fell for in my home class..

(bridge)
she looks and smiles
she turns bright red
she says i feel the same way as you said
i couldn't wait for the
day you talked to me
we should be together
wouldn't that be something?!
now take my hannnnd
ill show you the way
the way into my heart
we'll never be apart!

WHOO!

(chorus)
she's so sweet, she's so hot
girls would give anything for what shes got
im mezmerzied and dont know why
i look sooo deep in your eyes
shes waiting for me to, say the first words
im tryin to say something, she hasn't yet heard
will i do it? or will i pass?
all i know is..
i fell for the girl in my home class
i fell for the girl in my home class
ive got the girl from my home class...
i fell for the girl in my home class!!!!

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Old 11-13-2007, 10:05 PM   #2 (permalink)
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whao..... that deep due, there a song that just sung in my heard. that one of the best love song i've seen, it a good one for you to give to a girl you love XD if you got gut or already have one lol
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Old 11-14-2007, 09:37 AM   #3 (permalink)
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whao..... that deep due, there a song that just sung in my heard. that one of the best love song i've seen, it a good one for you to give to a girl you love XD if you got gut or already have one lol
thanks bro. i really don't know how i wrote this, i just thought of a melody in my head lol. i wrote the chorus first then pieced the rest together, i guess it worked out lol. thanks for the reply!
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no problemo
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Old 11-15-2007, 08:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Very nice song. I think it was put together great! I especially like the chorus :P
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