crashing and burning

[music &+ lyrics]

She’s crashing and burning.
Getting what she deserves.
Everyone loved her
But that’s gonna take a turn.
She’s crashing and burning.
Her life’s going up in flames.
She’s crashing and burning
Getting beat at her own game

She walked around
With her head held high.
She had the power
To ruin anyone’s life
A pretty face and a perfect body.
Everything seemed to go her way
But popularity only last for so long.
And right about now hers is long gone.

She’s crashing and burning,
Getting what she deserves,
Everyone loved her
But that’s gonna take a turn,
She’s crashing and burning,
Her life’s going up in flames,
She’s crashing and burning,
Getting beat at her own game


Her life is ruined.
What she gave, she got back
The boys she likes, hates her.
Her life’s a full-blown mess
Everyone’s laughing
Cuz they saw it coming,
But she didn’t realize
Until it was to late

She’s crashing and burning,
Getting what she deserves,
Everyone loved her,
But that’s gonna take a turn,
She’s crashing and burning,
Her life’s going up in flames,
She’s crashing and burning,
Getting beat at her own game

The tears in her eyes,
Show the pain that she feels,
Cuz everyone hates her,
It doesn’t seem real,
What happened to,
The way that things were,
When her life was perfect,
And she was a big deal.

She’s crashing and burning,
Getting what she deserves,
Everyone loved her,
But that’s gonna take a turn,
She’s crashing and burning,
Her life’s going up in flames,
She’s crashing and burning,
Getting beat at her own game



its just a song i wrote.
please tell me what you think

[Restoration]

if i'm being honest in my faith(Christianity)...it sounds a little dark.
and i try to stay away from darkness...
however it sounds like someone is going through some pain and i pray that it's not you...if it is, i would suggest prayer....

all is not lost, as far as the song goes...it is a complete song with a hook.
which alot of folks don't seem to put together to well. your arrangement is on point and your lyrics are not bad as far as the flow, it's the content i don't dig too much and that's just because of where i'm at right now.

Grade B+

in the name of Jesus
-Restoration

[kaer]

^^ Sometimes life's dark. Although I find this song to be more positive, seems to be a bad things eventually happen to bad people type of thing.

Anyway I like it, only I think the hook is repeated too often. The total message tends to be the same, with different words. I would suggest adding bits about what "she" did to give readers a better idea of the situation.
Although that's just my $0.02, work it out till it works out.

[Krent_Calstro777]

Restoration, I'l tell that I may be a christian but faith it's what i've abandon, well right I'm the Devil and i get what i want or so that how it goes.

M+L the song is pretty good but slightly vague though it just need more concept that's all, make it a littlemore of a story or a poem of course.