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Old 11-16-2007, 09:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default RakkauS Lyrics - Looking for Feedback!

hey there. some of my friends recently pursuaded me to put some of the lyrics that i write online, so i thought i might as well see what other people think of them. would be cool if you head over to my brand-new site and check them out:

www.rakkaus.de.ms

feedback of any kind is much appreciated, no matter if it's praise, encouragement, ideas, criticism or whatever! it would be sweet if you could leave a note in the guestbook though, it's so empty and bare at the moment, lol...

most of the lyrics aren't in use by anyone at the moment by the way, so if you're part of a band and want to use them, just leave me your mail in the guestbook and we can probably work something out. within a certain span of subjects, i could also write lyrics upon demand.

anyways, enough talk! please do check out the lyrics on my site. here's an example to give you an idea of what awaits you though:

(...)
Flames now roaring high
Burning thorns and ruins alike
Lust for sin and thirst for love
Pihi rising Phoenix-like
Soaring past the Fallen One
Ever further
Ever on
Flying free at last

Dead poet
Heading for the place
That he once called home
No longer there
Nor anywhere
But no longer alone
The quill he lost
Alive again
For He now writes the Song
That deep within the poet’s heart
He’d written for so long

A new Beginning.
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