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Old 12-13-2007, 09:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Whisper Me To Sleep..

with blank pads and empty pages
i'm dreaming of content and fear
Grace me with sweet vindication
and Weep your fears into my chest
Take this keepsake from my heart
whisper my frantic mind to sleep


Whisper me to sleep
Won’t you whisper me to sleep?


stare deep into my eyes
and tell me what you see
I'm so confused
out of control
I'm losing this fight
just tell me where to go


Whisper me to sleep
Won’t you whisper me to sleep?
Whisper me to sleep
Won’t you whisper me to sleep?


I need your smile, I need your tears
I need your love and i need your fears
I need your smile, I need your tears
I need your love and i need your fears


So hold your fear, confuse this not
your shaking hands, I'll hold you close
Don't be afraid, Don't fear the end
These autumn leaves were certain to fall
We'll hold our breath and stop our hearts
I'll never be what they've become


Whisper me to sleep
Won’t you whisper me to sleep?
Whisper me to sleep
Won’t you whisper me to sleep?





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Old 12-15-2007, 08:05 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Well....I think it's good. =)
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Old 02-06-2008, 02:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i think it s great
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Old 02-06-2008, 04:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice lyrics. You may work a little, but for a beggining are very good. Did you think about music ?
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Old 02-06-2008, 04:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Aaaah, and the title is awesome ! Believe me
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