The break-up dance

[shelleykapowski]

Verse 1
Hands up in the air
No more pretending I care
No one's gonna believe it
And this idea must be wrong
It wasn't working all along
No one else could conceive it

Bridge 1
I know it's time I got over you
So that's what I'm gonna do
But your mirror reflects me
You'll never forget me
I'll always be around

Chorus
But you're never, never, never gonna be
'Cause I'm better, better, better off you see
That you're never, never, never gonna be the right one for me

Verse 2
Look at my hands, look at my feet
While we are walking down the street
We don't know how to do this
Perfect words, perfect kiss
We just say "We can't resist"
But I know they see through it

Bridge 2
I still love it when we touch
But it's just so bad so much
I gotta go on without you
I always was the optimist
Never thought it'd come to this
I never thought I could doubt you

Chorus

Verse 3 (Different from other two verses, obviously)
We gotta stop doing this break-up dance
Turn of the music and give the outside world a chance

Chorus


It's the first song I've written in four months, and it has a lot of "gotta"s in it, which sucks, but it sounds much better with music. And feedback is very appreciated! Thanks!

[ELLIS]

It Was Pretty Good.i Read It, And Trust Me I Don't Read Much.it Keep Me Goin.thumbs Up.

[Buzzsaw]

Good job on the song. I hope you can write some more songs like that.

[Luke of Metal]

Not bad but the first bridge should be called a pre-chorus as there's only one bridge in a song