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Old 12-24-2007, 08:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I'll live another day

wrote this in less than 5 minutes, tell me what you think
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The ghosts inside haunt my every move
they see what I do
hear what I think
and I can’t live with that

I hate and I love
I don’t know why
but I can feel it
and I’m in agony

so should I just take it all away
throw my life away
maybe I’d be better off that way
I’ll live another day
when you can honestly say

that you love and you hate
you don’t see me eye to eye
and that’s the only way you can see
when you live, you save me

I love and I hate
I feel it, and I don’t know why
I live with such agony
when I could live another day
there’s only one thing you could say
and when you live, you save me
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Old 12-28-2007, 05:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice I like it but it may be little less of story but that's ok. The rhyme pretty well fit but my question would be what the genre of music r u playing with (it doesn't have to be literally though)
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