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[*thisishowwe'lldancewhen*]

another one i wrote in a very short amount of time....feedback welcomed

My heart skips a beat when I think you’re callin’
but why would you ever satisfy my expectations
I look up and hope to see you standing there
but all I see is empty spaces, wind blowing in my face
calling out my name, mocking me
I don’t mean to sound so in need of you
but you’re so contagious

I try to run away, but my feet aren’t moving
I scream at you, but the words aren’t forming
you make me so miserable
but im so in need of you

when I walk away I can’t help but look back
because you captivate me
you make time stand still
but it’s flying by as long as we’re together
oh you captivate me so I never...
you make me never want to leave

I wonder if I called out
would you be there for me...

I try to run away, but my feet aren’t moving
I scream at you, but the words aren’t forming
you make me so miserable
but im so in need of you

I try to run away, but my feet aren’t moving
I scream at you, but the words aren’t forming
you make me so miserable
but im so in need of you
how am I needing you

[igrec]

Aw ?!
I cannot believe it !
These lyrics are extremly nice ! I like them very nice. Are very simple and well said. I like the way you're showing the feelings. Try more.
It really a pleasure to read this... I have some lyrics made in this way, more poetical maybe, but the idea goes very nice

What you say guys ? Isn't it a really nice song ? (If it's going to be a song... or just some lyrics...)

Bravoo !